front cover one editing

 

This is my first draft. I added my masthead, date and barcode onto the image, as they are conventional for a magazine 

When editing, I added multiple cover lines, including a main cover line onto the front cover, as well as a price and the issue number in order to show conventions of a magazine. I also moved the date from its previous position to make it more clearly seen. 

I had to change to colours of the secondary cover lines in order to make them more visible, and also a thicker font. I also changed the main cover line, as I thought that 'through the lens' more accurately gave an idea of what the article is about in order to grab the audiences attention. I also changed the font of the masthead to make it more up market and therefore appeal to the target demographic

I decided to change to colour of the copy and position of the main cover line in order to make sure it was visible for my audience. I kept the red of the masthead for 'Celine mpaulo' in order to use convergence and link the magazine with the artist for value convergence.