Front cover two editing

 

for my first edit, I added the masthead to my cover image, and also erased some of the masthead in order to have my model's hands in front of the copy. I did this because it is a convention of Vogue, one of the main style magazines owned by Conde Nast. the masthead in red in order to link the 2 front covers, and provide a convention for my magazine.

I added the main cover line 

I thoought that the cover line 'from vision to visionary' was not visible enough with the colour that i had chosen. i therefore changed it to a very dark blue, and i think that this enables in to be seen more clearly than the black that i was using previously

AFTER THE FIRST DRAFT 

I decided to change the colour of the main cover line as I felt that it was not visible enough. I felt that white was easier to see and stood out more than the yellow. I also changed the secondary cover line, as I felt that it was too long and was a bit clunky, and I thought 'the revolution' was more succinct 

I decided to remove my secondary cover line, as I felt that it looked too clunky and out of place in the centre of the page. I also felt the it covered too much of my models outfit, and I wanted the focus of the magazine to remain on style.