Monday, October 13, 2025

contents page two editing



i added a the masthead, contents, editors letter title and date to my 2nd contents page. this was in order to conform with conventions, and also to make sure that the layout was similar to my 1st contents page to create a cohesive sense of brand identity. i also added the social media links and page numbers to conform to conventions. i had a picture of my model from my first contents page in order to further create a cohesive sense of brand identity among my products



i added a picture of the front page that is the same issue as the contents page in order to create brand identity. i also added captions to all of the photos on my contents page so that i can make sure that my NEA fulflls that brief requirements and also conforms to conventions of contents pages


i added contents to my contents page so that i could make sure that it conforms to conventions. i also added some intertextuality with the title 'Accidentally in Love' refering to the song 'Accidentally in Love' by rock band Counting Crowns in 2004



AFTER THE FIRST DRAFT




my feedback from my first draft lead me to realise that my primary photo from my first draft did not fit the general atmosphere of my magazine. in order to create a cohesive sense of branding, i wanted to take a photo that felt more creative and 'artsy', in keeping with the tone of my magazine. therefore, i replaced the primary photo with a photo that i consider to be more creative, and that i also think reflects the style conscious audience. this is because my model is dressed in a style conscious manner typical of high end style magazines, for example Vogue and Elle, and is applying make up, which is common in style magazines. i also changed the layout of my contents page, as i felt that it was more conventional to have my primary photo go across a whole page instead of only 2/3 of one. 


I was able to finish the cut out of my model and moved her to sit lower down the page, as I wanted to be able to include more text such as headlines and contents I order to fulfil the conventions of contents pages of high end style magazines. 


I added a website link to my contents page in order to show digital convergence 




on the advice of my teacher, I changed the layout slightly in order to have less blank space 

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